to love a woman


what is it like to love a woman
with tears like early morning rain
whose liquid sunshine, burning passion,
reminds you of the way you,
summers past, years ago,
magnifying glass in hand,
burnt a hole in drying grass?

 what it is like to love a woman
whose eyes break open the glass ceiling
just like they shatter every man,
whilst rinsing fear into your blood;
that which never quite fumbles for your heart
but manages to stop it still?

 too benevolent to kill

 what it is like to love a woman
whose humid breath
warms to the core of every cell
until you think you know her well 

what is it like to love a woman
for whom love flows like molten ice?

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17 responses to “to love a woman

  1. Very vivid and well crafted and heart wrenching piece.

  2. moondustwriter

    what is it like to love a woman
    there is power in the words and the touch
    nice sweet one

    Happy Weekend (hopefully with some love mixed in)

  3. Love flows like molten ice
    Nice!!!

  4. This is very deep! Keep up the good job and plz check out my latest piece

  5. What power a woman holds when you say

    “that which never quite fumbles for your heart
    but manages to stop it still?”

    Wow!
    x

  6. molten ice? hmmm..good one! hey, perhaps you might like to comment on some of my previous postings like- “tumbling”, “scented flower”, “a tale from the sky” and “rainbows and bubbles”?

  7. Love it… i hope i knew what it is to lova a woman like her… :)

  8. “what it is like to love a woman
    whose eyes break open the glass ceiling
    just like they shatter every man,
    whilst rinsing fear into your blood;
    that which never quite fumbles for your heart
    but manages to stop it still?”

    holy hell. heartstopper indeed.

  9. oh yh :)
    thank you my dear :D xx

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