but we weren’t


we are intrepid dreamers
lost in the rhythm of this life.
we’ve lost belief,
but once we believed,
though never always,
and we could have been right.
but we weren’t.

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i thought i’d do something different and write a “sunday 160“. 
here’s to the future.
and to understanding.

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20 responses to “but we weren’t

  1. i am wrong more than right, and realising that there is a bit of freedom…

  2. A very good Sunday 160. Thanks for playing along.

  3. I FELT this poem. . .deeply. Thank-you.

  4. oh my, I am loving the irony and the optimism! ;)

  5. Lovely… every line just sings

  6. Oh this is cool. “and we could have been right.
    but we weren’t.” this is my favorite line

  7. i love your posts and i keep on reading the previous ones. :)

  8. Great ending: “and we could have been right but we weren’t.” 5 stars for sure!

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