like a child
falling into a towering house of flimsy cards
i trip
into the rhythm of you.
each step:
a cautious forward stumble
into unknown, into benign,
the magic of your foreign eyes


18 responses to “sparkling

  1. Teresa Silverthorn

    This is exquisite…

  2. This is beautiful. You always get it just right!

  3. Thanks for writing a poem about me. :)

  4. Oh, I love this. Very interesting. Keep writing! And living it up! =] haha.

  5. Lovely– brimming with new romance!

  6. nice, succinct, beautiful…

  7. beautiful:
    these lines are.

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