hurricane in a bowl

drink me through a straw
and make me swirl:
i’m just a hurricane in a bowl
waiting to shake up the world.

and since
there was everything and nothing
before you:
a spiral spinning phosphorescent blue,  ̶


i see that world in you.


8 responses to “hurricane in a bowl

  1. “a spiral spinning phosphorescent blue, ” – love that line.

    Nice work.

  2. Swirling and colorful
    How are you sweety???

  3. Gurhl, you got it going on! Loved the blue, swirling imagery! The pic is perfect! xoxo

  4. i see the world in you.

    – that’s it! :)

  5. Wow. This was msmerizing.

  6. thank you all :) much love to every single one of you!! :D xx

  7. well done, enjoyed reading this one!

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